its a little too busy for my taste (tho i would be the first to admit im a minimalist) but more than that, the rhythm itself is lacking.

imo proper techno is about the percussion/beat/rhythm first, then you think about the samples you gonna use over top second.

if the percussion alone makes you wanna fuk, fight or just get up and gurn, then it'll (usually) be a good tune no matter what samples, acid or basslines you drop in and out.... ;)

it's not that this is bad techno by any means, just my 2.5 cents.