now then m8 like this alot like how the bassline drops is that done wiv the pitch love the little stutter drop outs at thee end of the bars and the litle cheeky reverses perhaps add a ride tho to compliment it a litle more and i perssonaly would add more percussion it realy picks up after 3.45 alot more init
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