Cant disagree with any of that
Probably going to have to layer a bigger kick into REC, most of the sounds are straight out of a drum machine.
Had a bash at tightening this up. Just trying to work out a decent structure and find the right accompanying elements. At the moment it doesnt quite kick in how I want it to but its getter there
http://www.thedivide.co.uk/audio/new/50_04.mp3