I like this.
The atmos and overall fell is nice, fresh sounding, very techno.

Mix wise, I see quite a few problems (I`m a hard critic though)

Well, firstly, the kick lacks real size in the mix, so I think it could be larger, and maybe coupled with a more live sounding kick, so it has nice bottom end from the original, and a little mid range slap from another.

The lack of weight in the kick, throws the balance off with the hats, so the groove, which would be strong, lacks impact.

I`d maybe pull back some of the verb in the mix too, as it makes the mix a little too airy.

all the top end stuff is really nice.

The mid range could maybe do with alittle more punch as well. Some better cutting with Subtractive EQ will help give some more clarity to the mid range percussion.

So overall, love it, but the tune as a whole is weighted too much to the top end.