Well, I read done in 15 minutes, so I didn`t wanna download or comment until you`d done a repost.

Hmm, well, compared to your previous stuff, the production here seems anrrow, and a little bit static.
The bottom end is a little muddy, the bass could be clearer, and the kick seems to blend and squash into the bassline.

I like the main riff, it could maybe jump out a lot more, if it is meant to be such a main feature, more attack-y compression and better eq, maybe some subtle twisted fx on it too, kinda behind it.

the little fx/ambient scrapes that pop in are lovely.

Overall, I don`t know how much time you`ve spent on this, but if you are gonna keep it this minimal, then really polish and shine each part so it gleams.

I like it, but it needs a good overhaul.