nice one rory, listening on headphones but really quality stuff here, makes me want to go make some visuals ;-) third time to listen to it now and not getting bored at all, at first i thought u could seperate it into two different tunes again but on second listen everything follows and fits in a nice pattern. love the first notes that come in at round 1;35 , sets the mood nicely , but think you could bring in the pads after the break at 2;05 a bit quicker (on the first beat) and as it loses a bit of its energy (could argue the opposite to that though either?)../ round 4.10 it gets a bit distorted, on purpose?? id make it even more angry right there to stress it more, and have a bit of a 'climax'. all rolls nicely, good stuff, lookin forward to the live set, see ya in the sun.