My thoughts and honest opinions.
The mix is a little narrow, and lacking warmth and weight.

I like the bassline, but it needs to roar, and be more raw.

Overall, this seems below your normal standard. This feels like a collection of loop CD bongo and conga stuff with a few elements over the top. It does feel familiar to me, but in an anonymous, kinda average DJ fodder kind of way.

Sorry, don`t mean to be harsh, but I think you can do better than this.