Ok guys, i will take your constructive comments into consideration.
Maybe i posted this track up a bit to early tbh.
DB: i thought i'd try something a bit different and maybe it hasn't turned out like i wanted it to but i take your thoughts on board, so nice one mate.

For the life of me i cant think of what record it sounds like but i'm interested to know, so if anyone can post something up i'd be very greatfull.

Al