ok.. first thing is the snare sound. dont like it at all.. too flat. i do like the 808 style beat though just a tighter snare would be nicer. love the synth that comes in, especially the dub delay on it. the low synth is nice and growly although could be a touch higher in the mix. the voices are interesting and not too overdone.

not crazy on the d'n'b style bass that comes in half way through (i think it fitted better in a previous track you posted).

over all i like about 80% of it. and its nice to see you arent afraid to try differant sounds and ideas. some of the synths sounds arent to my tastes but thats personal likes so not really relevent.. just that snare bugs me.

good work.