I like the industrial start to the track, its cool. I think it gets a bit boring though with it being like that so long and needs to change after the start of the track has truly come in so not to be boring. I like the break though, kinda oldskool hardcore, mate I love oldskool hardcore. I been raving since january 1993 and use to go to slammin vinyl, dreamscapes like 7,10 etc... and die hard, pleasuredome etc... so I miss them days, and cos of this the oldskool feel of your tracks is well sweet as.