man this second one sounds much better.
Again the drums I would like to hear with more prominence and life, like the hats need more life, some verb or dirt or somthing because they sound a little dry as is I feel.
Love this bass type synth thats present thruout.
Sorry for being negativebut I also feel there should be some more work done with this atmosphere(find that verb dude)
Theres a free one in the Vst thread in the production forum, Cinamatic reverb I think its called, check it out mate its realy good as a send effect for hats, drums and great for atmospheres.
Realy like the vibe and feel of both tracks, the second one most.