A-Side - Corrupted

[Seb Neitsa]

Hi everyone ;)

I hope you'll like it !!

bpm : 144

http://hurryupman.free.fr/A-Side_Corrupted.mp3

[dan the acid man]

some nice ideas going on here, the top end is a bit too harsh though

[mux]

I agree with Dan; there's an awful lot of hissing up there that could be way more pleasant with, perhaps, the judicious use of a gate? Might be worth experimenting with a de-esser, perhaps. That breakbeat sample also makes the groove of the track feel a bit awkward. If you're not already, maybe try pulling it into ReCycle and experimenting with swing a bit, see how that changes the feel of the track. Definitely need to get rid of some or all of that hiss - maybe an autofilter?

Good solid TR-909 kick going on tho; I bet this sounds great on a PA.

I especially like the weird loop that comes in at about 1:30 and again at about 4:55. :) The kick breakdown at 1:52 seems a bit out of place (on the wrong bar, perhaps?), but is definitely welcome - I was hoping to hear more kick fills like that later in the song, say, every 64 bars. :) (I LOVE REVERSE 909 KICKS)

[dirty_bass]

I like it, but the guys are right, way too harsh.
Sounds like you stuck quite a hard compression over the whole song and this has cuased serious hiss (and reduced the overall dynamic). I could be wrong.
The tops end up lacking depth, and come out flat and hissy, so this needs addressing.
That bongo loop that comes in at 2:14 needs to be blended in to the mix a little, maybe some more reverb or a delay.
Nice kickdrum workout though. That would really flap the trousers!!!

Just get down and clean up the EQ and you will have an absolute belter.

I have liked most of your stuff so far :clap:

[Seb Neitsa]

I'll try to remove this ****** hiss, and follow your advices even if I don't understand all :lol: THX GUYS, I never had so much detailed comments on a track :clap: ;)

[Seb Neitsa]

I'll try to remove this ****** hiss, and follow your advices even if I don't understand all :lol: THX GUYS, I never had so much detailed comments on a track :clap: ;)

well, it's done, I tried to remove this, please tell me what do you think now ;)

[mux]

Same URL as before?

[Seb Neitsa]

Same URL as before?

yes same url :dontevengothere:

[professor]

the highs are still hella harsh! nice programming though...nice and interesting little roller

[Seb Neitsa]

the highs are still hella harsh! nice programming though...nice and interesting little roller

ok, I used to put a lot of highs in all my trax, I'll look at it later ;-), thx for your comment

[Seb Neitsa]

I updated a last version, hope it's good now

[monotone]

damn, now this is techno.. great and pounding. Sounds
are great ! Really industrial. Nice bassdrum, altogether
it has a great drive, pounding !

Sounds added in the break are cool !

Another break added in the middle with the same sounds
as the first one will make it even more though.

Mastering sounds OK 2

Great track !

[Seb Neitsa]

damn, now this is techno.. great and pounding. Sounds
are great ! Really industrial. Nice bassdrum, altogether
it has a great drive, pounding !

Sounds added in the break are cool !

Another break added in the middle with the same sounds
as the first one will make it even more though.

Mastering sounds OK 2

Great track !

thhhhhhhhhhx :dontevengothere: