this one sounds a lot cleaner.. again very boomy down the bottom end though.
theres some nice use of filters but again the higher synths are a little too loud in the overall mix and theres a weird breakbeat that comes in (which i quite like :)) but its far too loud..

you need to work at getting your overall levels right and your structures.. your tunes need to go somewhere and not just meander.

but like i said a LOT cleaner than the other one

heres my rmx of the same tune as a referance
rock the show


as for compression.. i apply it seperatly to almost everything in the mix but not on the master output. then for mastering i apply multiband compression VERY sparingly over the entire mix.