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    Default [techno] Rhythm Technologies - Broken

    just trying something a little differant..

    would love feedback on this as its not like anything i've really tried b4.

    http://www.chrome-metronome.net/rhyt...ies-broken.mp3

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    Not to keen on the main bass synth riff (but thats just personal preference) maybe if you wrote another sequence to play off it?, but the drums are dope! Really slammin.
    I do prefere 2nd half of tune...........nice one once again
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    Quote Originally Posted by force
    Not to keen on the main bass synth riff (but thats just personal preference) maybe if you wrote another sequence to play off it?, but the drums are dope! Really slammin.
    I do prefere 2nd half of tune...........nice one once again
    simular comment really, diffrent sequesnce on the bass would be nice....but evrything else is sweet mate!! nice one baz ;)
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    new mix up..

    synth has stayed the same (i like it :)) but i tidied up the bottom end a bit and added an atmospheric synth over parts.

    http://www.chrome-metronome.net/rhyt...ies-broken.mp3

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    Solid work again,v2 sounds a bit better to me

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    http://www.chrome-metronome.net/rhyt...ies-broken.mp3

    slowed down a little to give it more groove...

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    Sounds nice production wise Baz, alltho I did feel like I wanted to hear a bit more sub action but maybe thats me mate also I would like some ofthe percussion to be a bit more driving, again thats just me
    Nice party tune, like the breaks bits.

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    Liking it personally Barry. Only in the phones, but to me mix sounds quite proper. Good work in my humble opinion.

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    Yeah I think I agree with Mindful on this one. Needs more bass. Not necessarily sub, but definitely something lower than the kick.
    Otherwise I think it does the trick

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    needs mo bass. dunno how much though, cause i can't judge on me head phones; very nice otherwise. :) the bassline riddim is cool, imho. maybe just a little more glide from one note to another?? maybe let them overlap slightly in the sequencer?

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    Not bad but as others said before it needs a little more bass.

 

 

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