Poncho Sanza - my first track for quite a bit

[robin m]

Not very big or clever this one but it's my first for a while so thought I'd post it up.

Still needs plenty of work with the mixdown etc - it's all in Reason for the minute but I'm going to stick it in Sonar for polishing. Any suggestions (particularly critical production-type ones) gratefully received as ever:

Cheers peeps :)

http://www.4shared.com/file/3698714/...cho_sanza.html

[Aratron]

this tune ****ing rocks dude

first one for a bit - this is the dogz bollox.

i know im biased Robin's a fantastic guy - but this tune is quality - this needs to be on vinyl - like now.

:clap:

come on robin what else is lurking in your mind waiting to be written.

another fantastic creative track but this one has commercial appeal aswell.

well done mate.

[BRADLEE]

I'd say it defintely is a good track Rob. More of the commercial tip than anything in my humble opinion. Would sound well proper with a female pop singer on it or something I rekon. Everything is well in place. Keep up the good work man.

[detfella]

i like this, slab of cheeky techno. the off beat synth is soo clichéd, but it works ok (the pitch work sounds nice), you could really **** the sound up with nirto or something make it screw up your mind. good little fx thrown in. nice work fella :)

[robin m]

Cheers for listening & comments people (especially Aratron, your cheque's in the post mate! :lol:).

To be honest after putting this down & coming back to it a few days later it makes me cringe, it's cheesier than Leerdammer and simpler than a pot noodle. Hey ho like I said it's my first effort in a bit and I'm having a bit more joy coming up with stuff after a bit of a break from it all, it's a learning curve innit :)