Thomas, sound quality seems not too bad at all this time amigo. I like the broken beat and also the synth/bass sound. Maybe could have a little bit more FX on that element though in my humble opinion. Could bounce it down to audio, then bring it into your favor audio editor, then maybe just do a couple of edits with perhaps some filter or stutter type stuff. That would spice that up a bit every so often. Now the second break, maybe could use a little bit more work going into it as well. Perhaps some sort of crazy long fx sound would really bring it in a little bit smoother. The synth though my friend that comes in on that break, maybe just my personal taste, but I would go with some other noise and a differant type of pattern. What is currently present seems more to be a psy-trance type of element. Maybe just not my cup of tea I guess.

Anyways, keep at it man. It takes a good while to really have it all come together. I still learn something new all of the time when I do a new track. The methods will just come to you. Please keep it up and let me hear the finished version when time provides. I will try to provide more accurate feedback then as well.

Thanks for sharing Thomas.