Yeah unlike Scott I like the bang bang....but this is pretty cool too man. I agree with him that the synth does chime a bit high to the senses. I think maybe you could duck a couple of dark little atmos some where in the back as well. Would give it just a touch more movement in my humble opinion. Maybe a couple of edits to that synth noise as well...(I.e. a couple differant patterns) Then again what do I know...all I make is the bang bang.

Keep up the good works man.