Good ideas, and a pretty good track.
I like the toms and the bass.
I would say you need to beef this kick up as at the moment it seems to me to be all mid, It needs some low end weight.
Maybe boost the lower freqs (at say 50hrz)on the kick......or maybe the kick just doesnt have the freqs to be boosted so maybe layer a bass drum with a nice low end with your current kickdrum....
Or not : )
Then I think the bass will sound better too.
good stuff anyhow.