Casual violence - Passive response

[Mindful]

Hi
So this is one of the many tracks Im working on at the moment,
I could do with some fresh ears to listen please so any comments on production or any kind of feedback at all would be super fly.
Thanks.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.ph...8934616DE6FF94

[stjohn]

ye this is sweet. lovely atmosphere as always mate. very subtle changes that work. nice work ste.

4/4 ??????? ;)

[Mindful]

cheers mate

lol 4/4 yes

[Siege]

Dark and moody vibe going on here..like the percussion.On the headphones at the moment but gonna listen on speakers in a minute....would have liked to have heard some sort of small drop later on in the arrangment..introduce a new sound maybe,but just my opinion homie. Other than that good stuff stevie boy....bell u over the weekend

[BRADLEE]

beautiful darkness my friend. Makes me really fall deeper into my state of depression. Enjoyed it quite welll....Looks like I'll go home soon and either make a dark tune too....or shoot myself in the head ha ha ha

[Mindful]

Cheers for listening and feedback fellas : )

bell u over the weekend

will be working on some music if you fancy it tonight Cal.
Was going to see if I could get some of that off Ritchy maybe too, Ill try and bell you later on.

You not checked your messeges?
anyhow add me to your MSN geezer, my ad is ... purist_cv@hotmail.com

@Brad lol

[Mindful]

Ive been told that the first link is a bit shit like so heres a new one : )

http://213.129.73.14/members/my_trac...2139374125.mp3

[Barely Human]

Sounding uber cool man, i like the progression through the track. I think the kick drum needs more impact as it seams to just disapear in the mix.

Good stuff man.

[Mindful]

thanks for listening guys
@Lau, you homo
@Al, yeah mate thanks I will sort that(think its the comp thats killing the top end click maybe)
@Force, yeah maybe, the plan was to keep it pretty linier so the progression of the track is more about the feel BUT yeah ill maybe do some subtle changes thanks.

Again thanks all:)

Any comments on the bass?
I thought that maybe it was a bit loose but it seems to loose its character when compressed tight....Any thoughts please?

[Honeey]

Evil, darkness, and foreboding very cool