Casual violence - Passive response

[Mindful]

Hi
So this is one of the many tracks Im working on at the moment,
I could do with some fresh ears to listen please so any comments on production or any kind of feedback at all would be super fly.
Thanks.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.ph...8934616DE6FF94

[stjohn]

ye this is sweet. lovely atmosphere as always mate. very subtle changes that work. nice work ste.

4/4 ??????? ;)

[Mindful]

cheers mate

lol 4/4 yes

[Siege]

Dark and moody vibe going on here..like the percussion.On the headphones at the moment but gonna listen on speakers in a minute....would have liked to have heard some sort of small drop later on in the arrangment..introduce a new sound maybe,but just my opinion homie. Other than that good stuff stevie boy....bell u over the weekend

[BRADLEE]

beautiful darkness my friend. Makes me really fall deeper into my state of depression. Enjoyed it quite welll....Looks like I'll go home soon and either make a dark tune too....or shoot myself in the head ha ha ha

[Mindful]

Cheers for listening and feedback fellas : )

bell u over the weekend

will be working on some music if you fancy it tonight Cal.
Was going to see if I could get some of that off Ritchy maybe too, Ill try and bell you later on.

You not checked your messeges?
anyhow add me to your MSN geezer, my ad is ... purist_cv@hotmail.com

@Brad lol

[Mindful]

Ive been told that the first link is a bit shit like so heres a new one : )

http://213.129.73.14/members/my_trac...2139374125.mp3

[BranLanen]

Really dark...! It's great, there is an atmos-fear around there, but who said fear? xD
I like it because it is full of sound, all frecuencies are full.
You have the power!

[lau]

yo homo the link keeps telling me the system is busy...?? anybody else having the same problems???

[BRADLEE]

yo homo the link keeps telling me the system is busy...?? anybody else having the same problems???

still works on my end....

"Must be the Lau Blocker 6000"

[lau]

lol I didnt see the new link...

fudge....

anyways sounding sweet!!! a bit different from your normal beats but dope!!! phat amtmo's!!!good stuff!!!

[force]

Love the atmospheres, and the sense of 'Dread' you've got goin on.
personally would have liked to hear some more variation on the beats and rythems.
Just personal preference tho.

good work mate

[Barely Human]

Sounding uber cool man, i like the progression through the track. I think the kick drum needs more impact as it seams to just disapear in the mix.

Good stuff man.

[Mindful]

thanks for listening guys
@Lau, you homo
@Al, yeah mate thanks I will sort that(think its the comp thats killing the top end click maybe)
@Force, yeah maybe, the plan was to keep it pretty linier so the progression of the track is more about the feel BUT yeah ill maybe do some subtle changes thanks.

Again thanks all:)

Any comments on the bass?
I thought that maybe it was a bit loose but it seems to loose its character when compressed tight....Any thoughts please?

[Honeey]

Evil, darkness, and foreboding very cool

[jk_scowling]

Very dark and atmospheric, very good.

[BloodStar]

yo homo the link keeps telling me the system is busy...?? anybody else having the same problems???

yep, i had same problem,. now works fine from the other link.
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cool track this one. i like the direction of the atmos as the track progress,. it is your typical dark moody paranoia stuff,good good. i cant comment on production too much,as i am on shitty cell phone headphones, but sounds ok to me,.

[audioinjection]

nice track man!

i agree with iq though, the kick gets a bit hidden when all that atmosphere comes up, but good stuff!

[dan the acid man]

great track, nice and dark, keeps your interest all the way through, can't fault the structure at all.

as for the bass, yeah its a bit loose, maybe a touch more eq'ing with your bass or the kick will help the two to sit a little better

[Mindful]

thanks guys, havent worked on this since but will do tonight(will work on the kick then)

Thanks for your input.