Bizarre military march techno?!?!?

Well, I`ll give a little comment on production, but I am using headphones today, so my comments may not be too accurate.

Firstly, overall the track is a little dull, now I don`t mean in content, I`m talking about the mix.
The mix lacks sparkle until the hats come in, which are around about the right level of brightness, but they show how dull everything else is.
More life and excitement in the higher registers of some sounds would make the mix better.

The kick could cut the mix more clearly, but this is partly due to the point above. Generally I find it good to balance the top end of the kick drum with the high hats, in most, but not all cases.

The reverb in this is a little unwieldy, and, well, it`s not a very nice reverb. Have a look in the production forum for the free links to find some nicer reverbs. This verb is a little too springy and metallic.

And lastly, a little more variation over the whole tune would help to keep interest, maybe more changes, or extra things coming in and going out.

Keep posting mate you have entered into the endless mountain climb of production.