work in progress (help needed)

[Siege]

Yeah, im liking this mate..dark,atmospheric,underground nastiness.
Production sounds really good, love the scattered click type sounds and that distorted vocal snippet....really good selection of sounds.
Maybe you could add a touch more beef to the bottom end ,but listening through the headphones at the moment...Think the riff works ok,seems to give it extra character and that twisted synth later on is mean as.Think the track structure sounds good,even though you said not to pay much attention...Constanly changing throughout keeping things intresting and unpredictable.

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[force]

Likin what im hearing man(as usual).
cant really offer any advice at the mo cos ive got a baby cryin and a four year old trying to rip my leg off!

[BRADLEE]

Likin what im hearing man(as usual).
cant really offer any advice at the mo cos ive got a baby cryin and a four year old trying to rip my leg off!

ha ha, well I know that feeling too....but at the moment no little ones trying to pull me under the water....lol

About the tune though, only in the phones, but loving this for sure homie. Excellent ****ing jam. Reminds me tons of this old Christian Wunsch tune. Love every second homie!!!

[Mindful]

dl now mate and will listen at home later, it will take me time untill i post comment and you will probably have finished it by then but ykow

[Mindful]

nice, sounds grainy and filthy.
is this building up to somthing nice?
Ya dude thats ****ing cool, the kick is strange but I like it very much.
Totaly your sound this mate, the way its allways freaking out and
doing somthing different,
The chords are beautiful, like an industrial blade runner
and shit the way it comes out of the break at 3.00 is class.
this at 3.40 is deadly.
Reminds me of Kareem stuff a little but with that little extra weird
factor.

Simon Cowell hates it im affraid but I love it you weird feck.
Proper techno best thing ive heard for a while.
Ste mindfuls tip top super dooper techno class award
goes to you and error 404 today:)

[ERROR404]

linky no worky :(

[BloodStar]

interesting,. usually i dont hear tracks like this everyday. original. they are some sounds really weird sounding, in good way. i like it,. there is lot of changes here and there, which keeps my interest. nice. i feel little lost at some parts, but that is how it should be probably, hehe,. nice track..

[stjohn]

linky no worky :(

this should work:
www.chrome-metronome.net/slipper3b.mp3


thanks for the comments bloodstar n mindless. glad you liked it..

still some work to do on it yet as its very hap-hazard in places.. hopefully get something done during the week and fire it up

cheers