Couple little filter edits maybe here and there to the whole drum sequence...or maybe a little filter on the bass/synth noise coming out of the break....maybe slice and dice that little edit or something too. Would give just that touch more dynamics to the tune I think. (That seems to be the case with a few of your tunes that I heard)
In general though homie, nice little tribal techno rocker this is. Just needs a few little touches edit wise to make it shine like the diamond it is capable of being.
yeah, I think you are right on there. a little chop chop is in order good ideas .... very helpfull. thanks!