I think the track in a whole is hot like peppers man. Can't really comment on the mixdown, but like all of the sounds present. In the phones, everything seems well balanced, but could use maybe just a slight bit mroe low end....can't tell for sure.
My only critque over all that it seems to lose some direction after the middle of the tune. Just sort of repeats the first segment of the track with a few more edits....Guess I was waiting for some sort of additional sound or change in feeling of some type. Also could be because this is an 8 minute tune that I expected that.
Anyways man, over all really cool tune. Just trying to be as accurate with my feedback as I know how to be. Keep making the tunes man...really enjoy the stuff you've been making from a personal taste standpoint.