Jay Pace - Torin

[Jay Pace]

allo

New track - bit of a WIP but I'd love some feedback at this point.
Tried to do something a bit different with this one

Torin (6.12)

www.blackboxtechno.co.uk/torin.mp3

Thanks peeps

:mrmyagi:

[force]

GEEZER!!!
you've got enough for an EP now!
Again, theres not a great deal going on, but what there is going on works perfectly, and does'nt lose any intrest.
You're makin that 'more than minimal sound' your own.
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I did fancy the idea of an understated, lower pitch 303 line with a hardfloor style slide bubbling underneath it all.

super, smashing, glreat!

[Jay Pace]

GEEZER!!!
you've got enough for an EP now!
Again, theres not a great deal going on, but what there is going on works perfectly, and does'nt lose any intrest.
You're makin that 'more than minimal sound' your own.
#
I did fancy the idea of an understated, lower pitch 303 line with a hardfloor style slide bubbling underneath it all.

super, smashing, glreat!

Nice one mate :cheese:

Yeah, I want some more acid in this. And a few more changes in the bass.
Day off on Friday, will do some more work over the weekend.

[dirty_bass]

Nice, kinda classic sound.
I found the main riff a bit too loud though, and overall the mix was a little too digital and a little too abrasive, could maybe do with more analog treatment.

[BRADLEE]

I really enjoyed that one quite well. Keeps the movement thru the whole tune. And as said above, really coming along nicely with this slightly more than minimal type of sound. Cool stuff homie.

[audioinjection]

yeah, i agree with steve.....that main riff does sound a bit too loud in some parts, but it does have an oldschool feel to it! sorta minimal, but groovy. nice one dude.

[C.O.Prodigy]

I think that force's assessment describes the track most accurately. I can add that it was really enjoyable to listen to and fun, although I found that it ends rather cheeply, abruptly IMO. Perhaps that's the way it was intended.

good job!