Jay Pace - Torin

[BRADLEE]

I really enjoyed that one quite well. Keeps the movement thru the whole tune. And as said above, really coming along nicely with this slightly more than minimal type of sound. Cool stuff homie.

[audioinjection]

yeah, i agree with steve.....that main riff does sound a bit too loud in some parts, but it does have an oldschool feel to it! sorta minimal, but groovy. nice one dude.

[C.O.Prodigy]

I think that force's assessment describes the track most accurately. I can add that it was really enjoyable to listen to and fun, although I found that it ends rather cheeply, abruptly IMO. Perhaps that's the way it was intended.

good job!

[StoQ]

nice one dude;] that sound on the bottom reminds me mumbling cat hhihihhhih ;] good work

[loopdon]

beautiful sound imo. yet i think it could be shortened a little. not my absolute favourite of yours but rock-solid nevertheless. i would have liked a vocal snip in there or a nice neo-trancy synth-pad or sth. at times but that's prolly just me. top stuff. err and i love yer drums

[Jay Pace]

Thanks loads for all the feedback

Have reworked this slightly, added an extra acid part and some more percussion changes, and reworked the mixdown a bit.

Haven't really mastered it too much, going to leave that to the experts from now on.

loopdon - like your vocal stab suggestion. Might give this a go. Might put in a breakdown of sorts in there somewhere as well... sounding fairly trance like as it is.

same link as last time:

www.blackboxtechno.co.uk/torin.mp3

Nice one peeps :cheese:

[audioinjection]

yeah, liking how it sounds now man, good job

[SWANNER]

yeah nice track this mate.wicked style keeping me interested throughout.some good filtering, works well.