good shit, i agree with what fernando had to say, and i also liked the varation with the kick, and u used the vocal quite well, however, i think that maybe you could do with an open hi-hat on the off-beat, or maybe some more subtle percussion, i think it just needs that something extra. also maybe you could change things structure wise. good track though mate, its got potential, some really nice stuff there to work from. ;) :clap: