Voidloss - A place of dying - Dark odd thing

[dirty_bass]

My first mixdown in the new studio, I haven`t acoustically treated the room yet, so I`m not sure about my mixes right now, so let me know if I`ve done a wrongun.



Voidloss A place of dying

[BloodStar]

link is not working. :(

[dirty_bass]

link works now

[BloodStar]

nice dark moody track. i am liking the intro and then as the tracks goes, all the atmo sounds here and there are nice. also percs are groovin there nicely + i like those little groovin snips, spreading nicely to the stereo..cool.bass is massive, as always,.but sounds bit too loud or unpleasing in low mid region.but here i can be wrong as i am on shitty headphones, now..will check later on speakers..

[stjohn]

great sounds man.everything seems to be there alright altho the tighteness of the track is about 99% there.. theres one partular thing not sitting right. im hearing 2 subby things.... one that waves on every 2 nd kick, then one that wobbles. the woblle might actually be more mid, i cant tell 100% but somewhere along the mix its not sitting right. IMO

of course this could be intentional to add a weirder dimension to the rhythm so it could be just a level issue then.

another thing i could here... was the top kick low kick relationship was looser.. but again this is subjective as not all techno tracks (need to) have this monster subby bassdrum and tbh the wavey sub does the low end job perfectly.

anyways, i rellay like the vibe, especially when it picks up at the end, the above were me being ultra critical, just in case it was something to do with the room. look forward to the finshed version, Voidloss is doing the business these days....

whoever they are

[dirty_bass]

great sounds man.everything seems to be there alright altho the tighteness of the track is about 99% there.. theres one partular thing not sitting right. im hearing 2 subby things.... one that waves on every 2 nd kick, then one that wobbles. the woblle might actually be more mid, i cant tell 100% but somewhere along the mix its not sitting right. IMO

of course this could be intentional to add a weirder dimension to the rhythm so it could be just a level issue then.

another thing i could here... was the top kick low kick relationship was looser.. but again this is subjective as not all techno tracks (need to) have this monster subby bassdrum and tbh the wavey sub does the low end job perfectly.

anyways, i rellay like the vibe, especially when it picks up at the end, the above were me being ultra critical, just in case it was something to do with the room. look forward to the finshed version, Voidloss is doing the business these days....

whoever they are

Well the kick is intentionally "lite" as I wanted something more akin to a genuine kick drum from a kit, so I used a slightly supported 808.

There is a weird wobbly almost kicky sound in the high bass area that kinda throws the rythm around a bit, again, it is as you pointed, I added it for a bit of nuttiness to the rhythm, however, I`m not comfortable with the bottom end sound in this new studio, so it could be overpowering the kick.

Or is it just too weird?

I`ll have a look at tightening that section up a bit.

cheers mate, you got good ears;)