great sounds man.everything seems to be there alright altho the tighteness of the track is about 99% there.. theres one partular thing not sitting right. im hearing 2 subby things.... one that waves on every 2 nd kick, then one that wobbles. the woblle might actually be more mid, i cant tell 100% but somewhere along the mix its not sitting right. IMO

of course this could be intentional to add a weirder dimension to the rhythm so it could be just a level issue then.

another thing i could here... was the top kick low kick relationship was looser.. but again this is subjective as not all techno tracks (need to) have this monster subby bassdrum and tbh the wavey sub does the low end job perfectly.

anyways, i rellay like the vibe, especially when it picks up at the end, the above were me being ultra critical, just in case it was something to do with the room. look forward to the finshed version, Voidloss is doing the business these days....

whoever they are