nice and amtmospheric. massive bass. maybe to massive but i know that's the way you like it. so that's a matter of taste, clearly. but there is something that is a little weird, imo. i reckon that's the extra kick or sth. that comes in every second bar or sth, dunno. it makes it sound a little bit like two records are trainwrecking. this is probably the 'nutty' section :) 1:13 about would be an example. sounds a little alien in the track, i think. it just sounds a little displaced to me but i think it would with mebbe some extra eqing, i dunno. at first i thought there was an lfo running on the sample-startpoints kinda knocking it off a strictly quantized groove from time to time. maybe take the volume down on that clashing 808 kick or whatever it is or add a more distinct attack to that sound or replace by a different sound playing the same pattern.

i think the ending is a little abrupt?

i wouldn't mind some vocals in there at times but maybe not your trademark pitched down ones telling a story (sorry :) ) something more whispered with filred echoes???

shit, this probaly won't help at all. sorry.

i just noticed media player isn't reporting the track length completely so... my 1:13 comment could be absolutely useless.


it is a work of art, though and it is growing on me.


shit, this probaly won't help at all. sorry.