My last track..

[ERROR404]

really nice sounds :) i felt your track needs more detail and definately more kind of 'power' to the rhythms.
As the guys said i think the kick needs to cut through the mix a bit more.... liking the dark sounds though due - very nice.. reminded me a bit of some Inigo Kennedy's stuff on ;)

[BranLanen]

the dark sounds though due - very nice.. reminded me a bit of some Inigo Kennedy's stuff on ;)

Of course! mr kennedy always was a great influence for me...

Yes, i think i'm going to get more powered kicks and also add some othe element (i dont know what element yet) :)

[force]

Cool trck, although as the others have said, it needs a bit more dynamic 'punch'.

Try really emphasizing the first kik in the main kik pattern maybe.......? then take it from there