Sounds ok man, not really my thing so i wont comment too much on the content.

I think the kick needs rounding off to give it some boom, also the bass could do with having a bit more bottom end in the right place. The main problem ive have found tho is the whole track seams to be in mono. Really spread stuff out, and give them thier own place in the stereo field. Not only will this make the track some more natural and fatter, it will also give you lots more room for more elements. Not bad work tho man, keep it up.