First off, totally not my sort of music.
For me, its way to random. No apparant builds or drops, or even structure. Maybe its supposed to be like that, I don't know! I guess its IDM so whatever!!
Some of the synth/percussion parts over the top seem to be a little out of time, again, maybe thats deliberate. I think the kick sounds pretty flat too. I would try and give it a bit more bite.
The track is reasonably loud, and the various elements seem well spaced. But for me, its just too wierd and (sorry!) a bit pretenious.
Feel free to call me a cunt!