Listening right now my friend. I think it comes together better and better each time bro. This one should be good for a toolish type of track I think. My only critique is that I think using a bit more FX would make everything sound fatter. Seems alot of the noises just sound pretty dry. Just my opinion though homie, I hope this makes sense.
Yeh I think you might be right mate, I might add interest to some of the sounds. I like to think I'm getting better, not a lot of point else!