LSD (unfinished) need feedback

[psyfx]

hey start this track last nite, wondering if sum oe would be kind enuff to give abit of feedback :)

nice one

http://www.freewebtown.com/psyfx/mus...unfinished.mp3

[jk_scowling]

Hey man, not really my sort of thing but I'll try and give you some feedback.

I think the kick and the acid riff that the track starts with sound really muffled, they lack any punch or bite. All the higher end stuff sounds nice and clean, maybe needs more reverb on the pad sounds. It definetely needs another sound or variation to hold the interest.

Also reversed cymbals and snare rolls sound a bit dated imo.

You only started it last night though so coming along well so far.

[thomas_figo]

liking ur ambiente sonds.track is a bit boring,needs more changes for progression.bass colud be stronger.whole project sounds to empty i reckon.
thats what i think.