Good work mate, I really enjoyed listening to the tune. Thats a very catchy sample you've got in there!!!!! I also liked it where: halfway through the tune on the build-up where there is just a snare and a kick drum roll, when you fade back in the little catchy sample with nothin underneath it and then BAM - It kicks!
Maybe the Kick could have been a bit Harder and also i think the sample is a little repeptitive, its a catchy sample but its also a bit cheesey. But, never the less, i really enjoyed it!!!!!

I can also see what Hakka means about the re-inforced bass, it does sound like a mix. When i first listened it i thought you had dropped in another tune. Its like 2 beats combinding.

Can i just ask you, have you only used a computer to create this tune?
Im going to be creating some hard trance shortly and whilst im only starting off i just wanna use a comp @ first. I've been told to use: Cubase, Fruity Loops, Rebirth and Acid Pro? Are these good to be starting on???

Thanx