Hi mate,i am sure i can hear you kick much more on this one which sounds a lot better i can hear the thump of the kick which that is what you want,i have a great CD which i told you about mixed by Blu Peter same style as this tune your making if you want me to upload it to You Send It for you i will it is a free CD anyway that came with a magazine so you can listen to there mix down's etc.
I would try to copy there mix down as much as possible get yours sounding like there but you could save your tune again for extra experiment so you have always got your old one...Monty...