cheers for the comments guys, feedback is much apprecited ;)

I'm trying to develop this a bit further, i think some more detail and movement would aid it a bit in holding interest.
Point taken about the structure - needs a bit of a tweak to make it a bit easier to listen to..
I'm happy with the 'sound' here, certianly what i was after, just a bit of tweakery and buffing required i think... I'm working on an EPs worth of this kind of stuff so i guess we'll see if anyone is interesed in it in due course :)