2nd attempt at a club techno vibe

[p_brane]

hello there people

i signed up here a while ago but been away from the scene for a while. big up to locked in manchester

a listen and any feedback would be monster. i personally think the mix sounds a bit muddy. havent got a clue why.

its only a short one. will d/l in seconds

go on give it a listen

http://www.uploadthis.co.uk/uploads/...benchmarkx.mp3

i await your criticism with avid intrepidation

[thomas_figo]

a bit to short my friend.but sounds quality

[p_brane]

cheers mr figo for the feedback
im working on a full version at the mo

just wanted some feedback on the loop itself

btw down of the system is quality my friend keep it real

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[rhythmtech]

sounds not too bad m8.. kick needs a fair bit more definiton but the overall loop is cool.. hats are sizzling away nicely.

keep us posted on the finished version.

[p_brane]

cheers for the feed rythmtech.

not sure why the kick has got lost probably too much comp.

will post up when done.

just been on your myspace sites.

quality pounders

keep up the good work. what you using to master your tracks btw

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[Siege]

Intresting mate...i agree about the kick needing sorting though.

[rhythmtech]

keep up the good work. what you using to master your tracks btw

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i dont really master them.. leave that up to the guys who know what they're doing.. but the tracks on the net were run thru izotope ozone for stereo width on the higher freqs then ssl eq and ssl master comp.

[p_brane]

cheers for the info

got a bit further today

i figure if i can get the hole tune down on my pc before i start tweaking things to get the kick right and everything else.

been on it for an hour today if your interested heres a snippet

http://www.esnips.com/web/****ya

you can imagine what the stars are f--k. i should have realised when i did it really

[loopdon]

Nice loop there!

I agree with rhythmtech that the highs are sizzling nicely but i think they are too loud. Looking in a spectrum analyzer it almost looks like the eq is one line from bottom to top. I'd try to tone down them highs.
They aren't really piercing i would say and the soundspace is nice and open but..

I fear if you don't ears will bleed on the dancefloors. If the eq slope was more like \ than __ i think it would do this tune favour.

Maybe it's even more like a smiley face eq form \ / but nevertheless:

pull down them highs, i know one is always tempted to pile them up because ears get used to the sound playing so quickly and say: just a little bit more...

Very catchy loop though and nice production values alltogether.

Maybe compare the spectrum to some published tunes or something from time to time to see if you are overdoing it in the highs department. :)

[p_brane]

cheers for the feed loopdon.

im running on a set of not too good stereo speakers at the mo. but i agree that the highs are off. the whole thing needs some work yet. and it will get it.

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[Subotic]

ok i downloaded both versions
and i agree with the rest of the gang,
i see you brought up the kick drum in the second clip
but i would like to hear some bass line or low end rumble of some kind
i think it would fill the hole in the loop

also the highs need some taming again

hope this helps