Here is an improved version of my track (i hope). Still along way off i know but if anyone could leave any feedback for me that would be great.
Going on Subotics feedback i have tried to make the track less muddy and reduce the amount of low freqencies within the track. Hopefully i have achieved this to a certain degree and would like to know if what i have done is steering me in the right direction or misleading me down the wrong path.

Thank you
Doryl Roy

http://rapidshare.com/files/19691332...of_dreams-.wma