Demo Track - FEEEDBACK PLEASE :OD

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wobbly.. wonky.. acidy..

needs more variation on the b-line, but i really like where this is going

let me know your thoughts please

http://petedonaldson.thelanny.com/CO...emoversion.mp3


i know this says 'coproduct' but its actually jus me as is.. its part of a bunch of loops & parts i been makin for remix by other peeps.. may see the light of day soon.. maybe..

[jk_scowling]

Bit too wonky for me so i'll just comment on the prodution...

The kick drum sounds really boxy, I think you need to e.q. out the frequency that makes it sound muddy.

Nice acidline, but could maybe use a slight touch of delay and more reverb imo.

The bassline is a little to prominent in the low mid, and could do with being a little more in the "low" area if you know what i mean.

I'm liking the percussion, nice and clean, simple but effective. Maybe a little too much reverb on some parts.

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great stuff.. cheers. all good points to do some work on.

need a bit more variation in places i think.. spesh the b-line.. it needs to go elsewhere with the melody now & again.