Martin,

To me all sounds are quite dry in presence. So perhaps just a touch more fx usage on some of those percs would be nice. Kick drum also needs to be perhaps a little bit heavier, and the bass could also do with a bit more oomph. Arrangement and such is fine in my opinion. But also not personally keen on the vox my friend. Sorry that this is so critical homie…not my intention. Just trying to be helpful as I know the amount of skills you have. So show these people what you really got ;)