Hi mate... Like Your Shining...

Melody is very nice and it flows nicely. Think it needs more backing synth at low freq's to give the sound more depth and more power. Could be as I'm playing it on tinny speakers though... I will whack up the bass on my main system tomorrow.

The 2nd one I again love the melody and cool ideas involved in the build up and break downs.

I think the percussions sound a bit out of place... and a slightly harder kick may give it more ummphh...

But as uplifting trance goes mate I think your a good man for flowing melody. You should try to create some of the bonzai stuff... think you'd be good at that.