something a tad different ?

[jk_scowling]

Cool man, sounds better now, but it's still laking in the low end. It might be an idea to use a low subby kick underneath the other one to give it some weight.

[tonyc2002]

Cool man, sounds better now, but it's still laking in the low end. It might be an idea to use a low subby kick underneath the other one to give it some weight.

hmm...think ill give that a try.
some delicate EQ surgery will be called for me thinks

thanks man :)

[force]

Not my thing style wise but on a production level everything is nicely separated and tuned. I have to echo the comments about including a nice subby, longish kik underneath. If its tuned properly it would help drive the track and interact well with the current bassline i reckon. A few clever edits wouldn't go amiss either and maybe some other sort of rhythmic loop ???

just not over keen on the sax sample really

[tonyc2002]

Not my thing style wise but on a production level everything is nicely separated and tuned. I have to echo the comments about including a nice subby, longish kik underneath. If its tuned properly it would help drive the track and interact well with the current bassline i reckon. A few clever edits wouldn't go amiss either and maybe some other sort of rhythmic loop ???

just not over keen on the sax sample really

thanks for the feedback dude :)

this track is actually for college and i have to produce 30 mins of audio and (slighty annoyingly) 15 mins has to be sounds you recorded yourself. hence the sax sample