New Tune - need advice!

[cooki.e]

im new to all this shit so any advice or criticism on this tune would be well appreciated! cheers for taking the time to listen!


http://www.megaupload.com/?d=VRAMGI74


Casual Violence - keep up the good work, im loving your music at the minute!

[stjohn]

good tune man.... some great mood created! there is a bit of clutter there, with the running kick drums! by EQ your drums and bassline around each other, you might maximse the power a bit more!

Dirty Bass did a good tutorial here:
http://www.blackoutaudio.co.uk/content/view/29/29/

the progression is great. well done!

[cooki.e]

good tune man.... some great mood created! there is a bit of clutter there, with the running kick drums! by EQ your drums and bassline around each other, you might maximse the power a bit more!

Dirty Bass did a good tutorial here:
http://www.blackoutaudio.co.uk/content/view/29/29/

the progression is great. well done!

cheers for the advice mate. that tutorial is def helped with me understanding alot of things! cheers for listening!

[loopdon]

Just re-read that tutorial and it really is great. Well worth the read and nicely written and laid out. Where's part 2 ?

[cooki.e]

Just re-read that tutorial and it really is great. Well worth the read and nicely written and laid out. Where's part 2 ?

tell me about it! wheres part 3 and part 4 and part 5?????