this is really good greg. to be honest im not too sure about the 80's style lead sound leading to the breakdown, but i think the breakdown is really good, love the melody, and when it comes back in its wicked, reminds me of the bonzai sound, love those little teasing acid sounds too. really nice mate.

make sure u get this finished. ;) surely u can finish this? you've come too far, the rest should be easy man.