listeing on headphones so may be wrong but...

i'd love a fatter kick, more rounded and moody (if a ckick can be moody). i'd also work on the sounds in the percussion, adding a tad of reverb (tight) and some distortion to the snare to make it less mechanical. although it does lock down to the groove and works well, i think a more organic sound would work slightly better.

love the arrangement of the track, like the layering and progression... it's a lush track!