My new tune

[Carl]

i feel sorry for Miss XS - she isn't goin to like the comments some ppl left for her. i mean wheres the 'constructive' criticism?. i wouldn't be surprised if she didn't bother coming back again at all. shame ...

[Barely Human]

i feel sorry for Miss XS - she isn't goin to like the comments some ppl left for her. i mean wheres the 'constructive' criticism?. i wouldn't be surprised if she didn't bother coming back again at all. shame ...

Ive left her some pointers to get her going in the right direction! And she is quite welcome to ask me anything as im more than willing to help!

Remember - Everyone had to start somewhere! I can remeber when i sent a track to Mark, (i thought it was absolutly brilliant at the time), and he replied with some really good constructive critism. Although i couldnt see it at the time, his pointers really helped me get to the stage i am at now. :lol:

[darkstar]

I used to talk to her on Yahoo messenger, and shes a nice person

you right mark it was abit harsh saying things like that, infact its tight as f*ck!

[cascade]

firstly what programme was it bulit on,
seams like your like me and just started out so youll be like me and be limited to whats available but there are plenty resources for free on the internet to boost tunes into something more.

You couldnt have come to a better place than this forum (dont be put off by ealier remarks)
i would have started to produce if i didnt join this forum.
People you could really do with talking to is a gentleman called wezentiger,
hes always sorted me out and im sure he can help you loads.


From my point of view your whole sounds need more reverb and atmosphere. There needs to be clearly defined structure aswell, dont rush in with the main section on the intro.

Using a softsynths is fine but if you want the real warmth from the sounds and authentic sounding shit then go for hard synths, stuff like EC uses, (i want a virsus c )

I would really help more but ive got loads of work to do, ill send a better reply latters.

adios,
cas