ok i dont know if this really classes as trance but then i dont know what it does class at

someone told me i shud come on here and get your opinions so here i am

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Strea...83524&q=hi click teh link to hear a stream of my whole tune as it is now (needs a tad more i feel)
any feedback please email me missxs@missxs.co.uk

thank you very much for your time