firstly what programme was it bulit on,
seams like your like me and just started out so youll be like me and be limited to whats available but there are plenty resources for free on the internet to boost tunes into something more.

You couldnt have come to a better place than this forum (dont be put off by ealier remarks)
i would have started to produce if i didnt join this forum.
People you could really do with talking to is a gentleman called wezentiger,
hes always sorted me out and im sure he can help you loads.


From my point of view your whole sounds need more reverb and atmosphere. There needs to be clearly defined structure aswell, dont rush in with the main section on the intro.

Using a softsynths is fine but if you want the real warmth from the sounds and authentic sounding shit then go for hard synths, stuff like EC uses, (i want a virsus c )

I would really help more but ive got loads of work to do, ill send a better reply latters.

adios,
cas